问题描述：
在线等。可追加分数。截止一小时后
自己努力的结果：Dating back to the history of China, shanghai is the major city, which reflects the direction of the development during the past 100 years. Before one thousand years, Beijing city was the centre of the cultural field. In addition, Shaanxi was the most prosperous city 3000 years ago, while Shanxi was the cradle of Chinese civilization of 5000 years.不知道有没有语法问题
问题解答：
Chinese cultures of one hundred years,please look at Shanghai,one thousand years,please look at Beijin,three thousand years,please look at Shaanxi,five thousand years,please look at Shanxi.
PS.楼主你那个写法大部分都可以,不过有的语句表达的侧重点就变了.不过这段话的语境和用途你比我们都清楚,所以相信你这么写应该是不错的.
另外有个错误,一开始,date back to,是专指回到某年代,回到某一时候,而不是说回顾历史等.
稍微改一下就比较成功了.自己写是对的,每写一次都是一种提高.
China's culture depends on Shanghai in 100 years;depends on Beijing in 1000 years;on Shanxi in 5000 years.
Chinese Civilization of the last 100 years can be presented by the city of Shanghai; of the last 1000 years, the city of Beijing; of the last 3000 years, the province of Shaanxi; and the last 5000 years, the province of Shanxi.
The city of Shanghai stands for the last 100 years' Chinese Civilization; Beijing for the last 1000 years ; Shaanxi province for the last 3000 years; but Shanxi province for the last 5000 years.
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