一次难忘的旅行 英语作文5分钟内你答出追加50分

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（要一次难忘的旅行）英语作文 六年级水平，60词左右，不要超过65词，最好是一些易懂的单词，语法不要有错！！！！！！！！！！！急求！！！！！！！！！！！！明天就不用了！！！！！5分钟内你答出追加50分，要按以上要求！！！！！！！！！！

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An Unforgettable Trip
Yesterday was a fine day,my parents and I visited the
Great Wall. When we got to the bottom of it,we saw many people there. We were all excited and began to climb it.The sun was shining ,the wind was blowing.Soon we got to the top of the Great Wall.We were very happy.What an unforgettable trip it was!

After finishing my homework, I went to the Tai Mountian during my holiday, together with my friends. Very exicited, we were eager to reach the destination on the course by bus. We began to climb directly we got to the foot of the mountian. There were many visiters there, and all of us enjoyed the beautiful view beside the steps. Eventually, we reached the top. Not only did we have a picnic there, but we took several pictures as well. Though very tired, we were very enjoyable about this unforgettable trip.

An Unforgettable Travel
My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.
This is the trip l never forget.

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