上海中考作文一篇，大家帮忙改改啊~~

问题描述：

徐汇的题目：The Importance of Family
Every child needs a sweet family, because unfailing love is often offered to us by families. My parents often help me. They always give me some suggestions in every step of my growth. I was asked to be indepentent. and now,as i am growing up,i am so thankful to them for finding their suggestions more and more helpful. i love my family in the way they love me.
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我知道自己写的思路紊乱，语言结构balabala之类的分基本和我说再见了，故请求帮忙~还有语法的问题，TKS
修改的地方明显一点，谢了

问题解答：

家庭的重要性
每一个孩子需要一个甜蜜的家庭，因为往往是始终如一的爱为我们提供的家庭。我的父母常常帮助我。他们总是给我一些建议，我的每一步成长。有人问我要 自立地
。现在，这是我成长的过程中，我非常感谢他们为寻求他们的建议越来越多的帮助。我爱我的家庭的方式爱我