英语作文 假设上星期你的家人去长城旅游，谈谈你去之前，到之后及回家的感受 70个单词左右

问题描述：

开头已给出 Last week ，my father ， mother and I visitsd the Gread the Wall.

问题解答：

你肯定上初二，我记得我上初二的时候写过。那我就再给你写边吧。
Last week,my father,mother and visited the Great(你打错了，是GREAT） the Wall.we met at the bus stop early in the morning. When we were on the bus, we saw a lot of new buildings and new shops.Beijing was taller than before, I thought.
It took us about two hours to get to the Great Wall. When the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn' , t help thinking how wonderful it is! I wondered how the people in the past built it without modem machines. It is said you can see it from the space.I was proud of it.
After coming home I made up my mind to study harder than before. When I grow up, I will work hard to make our country more beautiful and stronger.
记得给我加分呀，看我给你写的多好，是吧，以后有问题再找哥哥