问题描述：
帮我修改一下
I want to plant some trees for my school.Because I hope my school become a green school. First,I will tell my friends what I want to do.And let them agree with me.Second, I will plant some trees on campus with my friends.At last,I will take care of the trees also with my friends.In addition,I will tell the students to protect the trees.I think my school will be very beautiful.
问题解答：
Because I hope my school become a green语法错误，要说成Because I hope my school to become.First改成first of all，Second改成further more At last改成Last but not the least.这样改了之后语言更加丰富the trees 最好把the去掉，不要去强调它。最后那个very 改成more。别的好像还好。
语法中就有错误...Because I hope my school become a green school.
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