英语短文，上海一日游，不要网上的，急急急急急！！！！

问题描述：

写一篇邀请班上同学去上海玩的邀请信，要有具体一点的出游计划，时间呀，地点等等，要像初二的学生写的，好的加分

问题解答：

Dear friends,

As we are on holidays now, why not to have a trip? It is not far to Shanghai from our city and we can have some wonderful days there. Therefor, I have got an idea to invite all of you to go there for some days. I think we'd better start off at Oct. X and take the train at X o'clock. I hope we will meet one another at the station on time that day. I have got a new camera to take along with us so that we can have some pictures taken of the city and ourselves in memory. What do you think about it? If you have any better idear, please tell me soon. I can get ready for it. Do come and join me. I am looking forward to your replies.

Yours ever,
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