问题描述：
话题是:many people like travel a lot holidays.people may travel by car,by sea, by train, by coach or on foot. which do you think is ideal way of travelling?
我写的是:i think that to travel on foot with some of my best friends is the most ideal way .first, travel on foot is one of
the most healthy sports . second, we can free to enjoy the scenery ,experience the folk custom along the trip,and
relax the mood by this way. third, we will economize much money without use any vehicle .
水平比较烂,见笑~
麻烦帮我作些语法修改,并把字数扩充到100左右.谢谢- -!
问题解答：
ideal是一个绝对的形容词，没有比较级和最高级
first后面的travel改成traveling.
healthy sports的healthy的最高级是healthiest.
free是形容词，所以要说we are free.
而且scenery后面最后用连词and来和下一句话连接
trip不能用along，用during.
没有relax the mood这种说法。单用relax已经足够。
不必用economize这么“艰深”的词，会很生硬。用save
without是介词，后面use改using.但是其实说use vehicle感觉怪怪的。
照原意改的话可以这样。
Nowadays,more and more people choose traveling as one of their recreational activities. And we have many ways to enjoy traveling such as traveling by car,by sea,etc.
However,I would like to travel on foot. And reasons are as follows
First, I think that traveling on foot is an ideal way for me and my best friends to be together. Nothing is better than having fun with good friends.
Second,traveling on foot enables me to enjoy the beautiful sceneries around and discover things that can't be touched within a car,a train or a plane. Also, my experience will be enriched because traveling on foot allows me to get closer to the folk custom.
Last but not the least,I can save money if I travel on foot,for I need not use any means of transportations.
In all, I love traveling on foot. If I had the chance,I would plan to travel on foot more often.
with the development of our country's economic,more and more people chose travelling to spend the holidays.So there are some way for us to travelling,such as travel by car,by sea,by train,by coach ,on foot and so on.
personally speaking,i think that travelling on foot with some of my best freinds is the most ideal way.
first of all,travellin on foot is one of the healthiest sport.secondly,we can enjoy the scenery as much as we like.we also can experience the folk custom along the trip and relax in this way.
lastly,we will save much money witout use any vehicle do some other more interesting thing during the journey.
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