谁帮我写篇关于旅游的英语短文

问题描述：

要求就是要写自己去过一个最有名的名胜古迹，还有旅游的益处就行了，
还有要具体写一下旅游的益处。。能开阔眼界什么的。。。。这个没写具体。。

问题解答：

楼上语法错误不下二十个，虽然很浪费时间，但我还是改错好了，不然楼主用了就惨了：

I heard that Lijiang was a very beautiful city when I was young. I travelled there in a holidy with my parents.I went there by plane. I saw there were many moutains when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucheng the fist day, and we bought some interesting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. On the second day ,we went to the Yulong snowy moutain, it was beautiful, and it was my first time I had seen the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain was a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy throughout this trip, because it was even better to that of Beijing!

Travel in Lijiang
I heard Lijiang is a very beautiful city when I was young. I travel there in a holidy with my parents.I went there plane. I saw there were many moutain when I got out the plane. The air was fresh.We went to the Lijiang Gucehng the fist day, we bought some intresting things and had a good meal in the Lijiang Gucheng. The second day ,we went to the Yulong snow moutain, it's beautiful, and it's my first time see the snow. I played with the snow happily. My father told me that Yulong snow moutain is a famous place in China, many people came here every year. I was happy in this trip, even like there better than Beijing!