旅行签证上关于行程的英文翻译

问题描述：

要求翻译一下一段,需要正式一点,因为填写签证上用的.谢谢!

RT:
我想去澳洲看我的女朋友，计划花费20天的时间：先8月1日出发去melbourne，然后8月20日回中国．期间，我和女朋友先在melbourne待10天，剩下的10天我将和女朋友一起去澳洲的各个旅游景点游玩下．

问题解答：

I'm planning to visit my girlfriend in Australia. I will be staying in Australia for 20 days. I will be leaving for Melbourne on August 1,then return to China on August 20. During my visit, my girlfriend and I will be in Melbourne for 10 days. For the remaining 10 days, my girlfriend and I will be visiting some tourist attractions in Australia.

楼上的不正式哦....

I am planning to visit my girlfriend in Australia for a total of 20 days. I will be departing to Melbourne on August 1 and I will be spending 10 days after that to visit tourists attractions in Australia.